(Another one I wrote a few years ago…I truly hope you enjoy!)
oh speak the silent whispers, through your amazing touch,
feed me every moment, with your fruit of ecstasy,
my most beautiful dreams, are paled by your eyes,
send me your tears, moisten my cheek for i cannot,
let me carry you across this river, be safe in my arms,
i only fly, when you are on the tip of my tounge,
inhale your sweet scent, and filled am i with all glory,
kiss your soft lips, lightning strikes me twice,
feel your whole body next to mine, hell freezes over,
a simple gaze at me, you pierce my innermost being,
you hold me till dawn, sunrise pales and shys away,
in sharing your secrets, songs don’t mean a thing.
i guess what i’m trying to say is,
you are my breath,
you are my motion,
you are my heaven.
September 21st, 2006 at 11:15 pm
The whole poem, the randomness of the rhythm is so beautifully coupled with the words of passion and love. The music you create in your words is so lovely….just lovely.
Peace, joy and love you, dear friend.
September 21st, 2006 at 11:24 pm
Thank you serenity and thank you for always encouraging me! I am going to attempt to write some fresh and up to date ones soon!
September 22nd, 2006 at 10:42 am
Such a blessing to read your poems! Well done babes for saying what you truly feel and being so strong to express it! The power of choice keeps it alive! Gwann bwoy!
x x x
September 22nd, 2006 at 10:44 am
Awww thanks Kavikim, I can’t wait for the next lot of your poetry too!
September 22nd, 2006 at 1:35 pm
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September 23rd, 2006 at 12:39 am
Amit, this is such a beautiful poem. Heartfelt. I love it.
September 23rd, 2006 at 5:10 am
Hey Nneka, awww thank you, I’m glad you liked it!
September 23rd, 2006 at 6:39 am
oh my…this is wonderful…amazing writing!
September 23rd, 2006 at 11:48 am
Hi Cristina. Thank you so much, I’ve got your email too and I will be replying shortly!
September 25th, 2006 at 8:11 am
It really is one of your best I think. Great feel to poem, great passion and emotion which comes across beautifully and gracefully. Kudos to you Amit
September 25th, 2006 at 4:44 pm
Hey Radhika! Thank You! Judging by the comments I’m gonna find it tough to top this one but I’ll surely give it a go!