
This was another poem that I wrote some years ago. I know my poetry writing isn’t up to scratch but I hope you that you enjoy the deep meaning!
In the summertime,
we make plentiful sweet love,
we go to the park,
play games and roll down hills,
the sun keeps us energetic,
long days, always time to do something,
the clear nights bring out the stars,
we gaze for at them till dawn!
In the autumn
we walk through fallen leaves,
loving that special sound,
when it rains we don’t mind,
we dance and get soaked,
you make heart shapes,
on the steamed up window,
i shelter you with my umbrella!
in the winter,
in a blanket next to the fire,
we watch movies till late,
the cold nights keep us close,
we snuggle so tight,
your warm breath on my neck,
in the mornings we can’t let go,
too cosy to get up!
in the springtime,
we go have picnics
in the fresh open fields,
we talk for hours,
afterward go visit the local tapas,
i bring you flowers, freshly picked,
the sweet blooming scent,
willows in through the window.
For every season,
there is a unique sensation,
each period is different,
and special in it’s own right,
every season i love you,
winter, spring summer or fall,
i am with you through it all,
my love.


September 15th, 2006 at 1:13 am
My only complaint about this post is your qualifier at the beginning that it isn’t up to scratch. Your poem is beautiful, Amit. Beautifully felt, lovely word imagery, amazing depth. I felt every line.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful gift.
Sprinklings of joy, love, and enchantment to you.
September 15th, 2006 at 3:44 am
Very nice, Amit….one feels the love grow deeper each passing season and year.
September 15th, 2006 at 9:29 am
Serenity, Thank you for your lovely words, can you explain to me which part you meant and how I could correct it?
September 15th, 2006 at 9:30 am
Michelle,
Thank you! I do too!
September 15th, 2006 at 9:57 am
Hi, Amit!
Greetings from Poland to you and thanks for lovely poem.
September 15th, 2006 at 10:11 am
Hi Krystyna,
Thank you for your comments and a huge hello to you and your friends in Poland!
September 15th, 2006 at 7:29 pm
Amit,
I just meant that what you said at the beginning that your poetry writing isn’t up to scratch … I disagree with you. This poem is beautiful with so much feeling, and it is a gift and a joy just as it is.
Peace, joy and love flowing to you…
September 16th, 2006 at 7:42 am
Awwww
I think it’s safe to say that my heart just melted!
September 17th, 2006 at 8:54 am
Amit!!!! A poet!!! No way! i NEVER KNEW! seriously good stuff amu. Dude, brought tears to my eyes!! Keep writing and sharing! x x x
September 17th, 2006 at 11:36 pm
Awwwwss thanks Kavita!!
Remind me to put up the poems you sent me too!